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Speculative Fiction Developmental Editing

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Are you looking for a manuscript critique or full developmental edit of your book project?

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A manuscript critique is an incredibly important step if you're looking to find a literary agent, get feedback on your novel, self-publish, or improve your craft.​

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Are you a speculative fiction writer? 

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Do you feel you've taken your novel as far as you can? Are you eager to receive solid feedback on it?
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If so, then reach out for either a manuscript critique or a developmental edit.
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​​What my fantasy fiction editing services offer:

  • Kind, honest, direct, supportive feedback on your novel draft
  • Focused feedback adapted to your publishing goals and your vision for your novel
  • Continued support: We'll have a debrief call where you can ask questions about the editorial feedback you receive, and you can email me anytime with questions during the month after you receive the report
  • Traditional publishing experience: Feedback grounded in a deep knowledge and awareness of the current market, through my experience as an editor hired by multiple Big 5 imprints in the UK and the USA
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Speculative Fiction Editing Services

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Coached Manuscript Critique

 

A manuscript critique is a solid, affordable first step – and for many people, it's all they need.

 

I read your novel once and deliver editorial feedback as notes (typically four to six pages) and on a one-hour feedback call. This is the most affordable critique option.

 

£75 + £60 per 10,000 words

A 70,000-word novel would cost £495

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Manuscript Critique

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If you want a short report of around 1500 words instead of a coached call and notes, this service costs £150 more.

 

Developmental Edit

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I read your novel twice and deliver editorial feedback as a longer report (around 3,000 words + extra worksheets), detailed manuscript comments (typically one per page), and on a one-hour feedback call. 

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This service suits authors writing in a new genre for the first time, or who are relatively new to novel writing.

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Not sure what a developmental edit entails? Read this blog post.

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Cost: Up to 70K words: £1395

        Over 70K words: £1395 + £100 per 10,000 words

   

I can also quote in EUR or USD.

 

​You can also purchase this service as an add-on after a manuscript critique or coached critique. I discount the cost of the original service from the total cost of the developmental edit.

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Short Story or Chapter Developmental Edit

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​You send me your manuscript, and I give you detailed feedback on it. Then we’ll meet for 30 mins to discuss the feedback on a call.

 

Types of documents:​

  • Short stories

  • Novel query packages

 

You receive:

  • Manuscript comments on the text

  • A summary comment suggesting big-picture revisions

  • A 30-min Zoom call to discuss the feedback

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Prices:

£149 for short stories up to 5,000 words

£299 for the first 10,000 words of your novel​​

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"The editorial report was one of the greatest feedback tools I have ever received."

—Vincent Burke, Queer Romantasy Author

Testimonials

"The biggest value I received from Andy was in the way he helped me to deepen my entire story. He showed me where beats or characterizations I took for granted had gaps to a reader, or raised questions I hadn't considered."

—Robert Winter, Queer Romantasy Author

 

​"Working with Andy made my debut novel better, and the results in distribution and reviews prove it."

Nathan Wagner, Speculative Fiction Author

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"Andrew's editing was of the highest standard. I learned a lot about the process from him and felt confident my manuscript was in good hands. It was a rewarding experience I hope to repeat soon." 

Ada Gadomski, Fantasy Fiction Author

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dr. Andrew Hodges 

7 Blackmire Terrace, Polbeth, West Calder, EH55 8FH, Scotland 

Email: fiction@thenarrativecraft.com 

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