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Speculative Fiction Editorial Assessment

Are you looking for an editorial assessment or a full developmental edit of your novel?
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An editorial assessment, also called a manuscript critique, is an incredibly important step if you're looking to find a literary agent, get feedback on your novel, self-publish, or improve your craft.​
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We offer: kind, honest, and supportive feedback on your novel draft, adapted to your publishing goals and your vision for your novel. Our feedback is grounded in a deep knowledge of the current market.
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​​​Coached Editorial Assessment
An editorial assessment is a solid first step—and for many people, it's all they need. The coached version is the most affordable option available.
I read your novel once and deliver editorial feedback as notes (typically four to six pages) and on a one-hour feedback call.
£150 + £60 per 10,000 words
A 70,000-word novel would cost £570 (approx. $680)
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Editorial Assessment
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If you want a short report of around 1500 words instead of a call, this service costs:
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£250 + £60 per 10,000 words
A 70,000-word novel would cost £670 (approx. $920)
I can also quote in EUR or USD.
​You can also purchase this service as an add-on after a manuscript critique or coached critique. I discount the cost of the original service from the total cost of the developmental edit.​​​​​​​​​​

"The editorial report was one of the greatest feedback tools I have ever received."
—Vincent Burke, Queer Romantasy Author
Testimonials
"The biggest value I received from Andy was in the way he helped me to deepen my entire story. He showed me where beats or characterizations I took for granted had gaps to a reader, or raised questions I hadn't considered."
—Robert Winter, Queer Romantasy Author
​"Working with Andy made my debut novel better, and the results in distribution and reviews prove it."
—Nathan Wagner, Speculative Fiction Author
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"Andrew's editing was of the highest standard. I learned a lot about the process from him and felt confident my manuscript was in good hands. It was a rewarding experience I hope to repeat soon."